The Riverside Confession Letter - Structure

PART IV (THE MURDER - VIEW 1)

SHE SQUIRMED AND SHOOK
AS I CHOCKED HER,
AND HER LIPS TWICHED.

SHE LET OUT A SCREAM ONCE
AND I KICKED HER
IN THE HEAD TO SHUT HER UP.

 I PLUNGED THE KNIFE
INTO HER
AND IT BROKE.

I THEN FINISHED THE JOB
BY CUTTING HER
THROAT.

PART IV (THE MURDER - VIEW 2)

SHE SQUIRMED AND SHOOK
AS I CHOCKED HER,
AND HER LIPS TWICHED.


SHE LET OUT A SCREAM ONCE
AND I KICKED HER
IN THE HEAD TO SHUT HER UP.
 I PLUNGED THE KNIFE
INTO HER
AND IT BROKE.


I THEN FINISHED THE JOB
BY CUTTING HER
THROAT.
Following the structure of PART III, the Confession Letter tops its climax with the murder of the victim.
We decided to show Part IV from two different perspectives, as a whole and split into two segments, because its composition reminds us of a bizarre poem or poems, or a sick ballad.
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